pearl jam came to do a concert in hidden leafville once, and the band liked it so much they never left. Now every Friday night, all the people who live in hidden leafville put on their hairy, Red undies and walk their Fox to the town square. Then they sit on the grass, listen to pearl jam play dub step music, and eat burgers.
No one has to go to school in hidden leafville unless they want to. Of course, everybody wants to because Chris brown and vin diesel are two of the teachers. Chris brown teaches sports and vin diesel teaches sports.
One day Chris brown said to vin deisel, “Maybe we should take the students on a field trip.”
“That's a(n) Super fat idea, Chris brown,” said vin diesel. “Let's take them to the most fun place we can think of.”
“But that would be hidden leafville,” said Chris brown.
“You're right!” vin diesel exclaimed. “Call off the field trip! We're already here!”
Hi Jahrome
ReplyDeleteNice writing I like the adjectives.
To be better than before can you please use similes.
thanks
Hi jahrome nice waiting I like the adjectives .N step you can put onomatopoeia
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