Thursday 14 March 2019

Notely poem

This is my Note.ly poem we had to get 20 words about our object that we picked out once we did that we took out two. My object that i chose was a dinosaur

3 comments:

  1. Kia ora jahrome it's me Dayton I really like your note.ly poem even though I done the same thing and my object was also dinosaur. All of my words were nearly all the same as your. Maybe you could make your words bigger but other than that I think everything was good keep up the good work.




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  2. I like our writing and i like how you have put your full stop in the right place.

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  3. Hi Jahrome my name is Calais and I am a year six student from Paihia school. I like the poem that you made, I thought that it was funny. When I made a poem I got mixed up alot, so I had to go get help from one of my friends and that's how I know how to make a poem. How long did it take you make your poem and was it hard? `Did you need help from your friends?

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